Faintly nights
sail me out to bad seas
where phantom mermaids
sprout silver razor fangs,
the evil legion
of
uncertainty.
They breed for war company,
not companionship.
My body floats through a
blurry
night vision,
disarranged,
my color changes to corrupt
as
salty thin waves shift
to fit
a temporal sea.
These are MY waters!
Taken by vicious fish women
who
slant
unstable nets
to the West way I wander in
my abducted waters arrest me
in mesh tangles and drag me
down,
down deep,
to the bottom of the bad sea.
It is here where I find them,
or they find me,
sick ghostly’s with their guns
and their sabres,
with their sick hats and masks.
I find them in mirrors, metal trays,
window glass, silver spoons,
lurking as gauzy shadows
at the bottom of the mad
seas,
bad seas,
They are women,
stringers
and
scribblers,
jumping from balconies,
blasting out their brains,
taking madness away from themselves and
handing it back to me,
in fins
and ferocious teeth that finally drag me
away from the mad, bad seas
away from uncertainty,
from faintly nights
to meet
the first blush of the sky
over seas of insanity.
Interesting. I look foward to reading more of your posts
A powerful message..hope you’re doing ok!
Whoaa.. What an imagination!!
What is imagination?
The ability of mind to think and express creatively what is beyond one’s senses!! (:
So how does ‘mind’ tap into ‘what is beyond one’s senses’ ? 🙂
Science has ruined my brain Colin… let’s ask the one who is imaginative … 😛
PS: I have a very different philosophy about this which you might find weird.. so let’s give it a rest?
“I find them in mirrors….shadows” Memorable.
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Whoa! I don’t think I can even find the deep places in my soul from which you write. My ramblings must appear superficial to you. Your words have a tail of fire behind them, like little comets, zinging the page.
Wow! FREE WOMAN! Love it.
Well done imagery, Maggie. 🙂
I can see their reflections as I read the words. A really well-done piece.
I have seen those phantom mermaids, they beckon me to leave the corporal and visit the blessed dead, where they are joined by fleeting pharaohs.
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Enticing and alluring imagery…it makes your imagination soar to insanity beyond…it leaves with a stinging bite. I am not used to this kind of poetry but this is spelled G-r-e-a-t!!
Love it.
These stanzas will stick with me –
I find them in mirrors, metal trays,
window glass, silver spoons,
lurking as gauzy shadows
at the bottom of the mad
seas,
bad seas,
They are women,
stringers
and
scribblers,
Enchanting.
Dear Maggie Mae,
I love your mission and your poetry. I am planning an anthology of poetry from people who care of suffer from mental illness. If you would like to contribute one or more of your poems please contact me. It will be called Slamming for sanity and I will donate all proceeds to anti bullying, and kids mental health. If you know anyone else who might be interested. Please refer my blog. Aloha and I love your imagery in your poetry.
“salty thin waves shift”
Possibly one of the most beautiful strings of words I’ve seen so far. I love the entire thing!