she threw back
her hard-boiled
bubble
crack!
oak
bed-post
shattered to kindling
mixed with
shards
of disorder
borderline conditions
depressions
quickly forming
her yellow eye
sunken
in
a lead blow
a
hard
broken
bubble
in a trendsetting
self-
inflicting
sarcastic nirvana
invisible scars
placed
strategically in
coffin cushion
reserved for herself
and
God
“…inflicting sarcastic nirvana”…. priceless! Love it….what’s up tonight, good lady? Have you been holding it in for a while?.. not complaining, just trying to get you to slow down a bit, and let me catch my breath! Kidding, of course… I’m glad I was witness to your outpouring today….do it is long and as often as you like, or need….
🙂 Happy night to you my friend! I’m actually in a fantastic mood today. I think it is due to all the writing. I feel something inside me is about to explode and I’m not sure what it is, but I feel as if I might burst if I don’t have release….so it’s all coming out here. Thank you for your SUCH KIND comments!! I am so full of gratitude for you!!
Great writing! As usual. Love your style!
I like it. Very moving. The breakfast with a husband piece was a BRILLIANT post!
Reblogged this on once a pp and commented:
so vivd the imagry the feelings….. WOW
awesome to take an egg and make it powerful!
Thanks for finding me!
I read some of you work and was truly moved.
You express things in your words that I feel, but can’t and I thank you for that.
“invisible scars
placed
strategically in
coffin cushion” GOOD!! imagery
I agree, the imagery is GORGEOUS in this.
Well written 🙂
powerful imagery, masterful use of language- hats off to you, maggie mae
in agreement as well…very deep you are…
hese types of awnings have got climatic conditions detectors which pick up on the sun’s rays, heat and wind flow. When it is warm and sunny the awning opens up when its cold and windy the awning retracts.