Welcome home, a strawberry plant
grows out back
for you, but it
has twisted to fingernails
to scratch away the bugs.
It has a heart, ready for transplant.
I promised to die,
I admit, I’m in the habit,
but it just sat in one spot,
sucking on water cells
reminding me what it
would feel like to overheat.
Now you are here, hiding in
the desert, my fruit not fertile
enough for you
to eat.
So, you say it’s the center of time,
one hand holds it,
the other says good-bye.
*hugs* nice work, as always a joy to read which leaves me looking forward to the next time I can read your work 🙂
Amazing poem, little one…. The ending line is bloody brilliant…
“So, you say it’s the center of time,
one hand holds it,
the other says good-bye.”
Whew! Powerful!….
Always a treat, and, yes, I’m going to steal this one for a post on ECR….
gigoid….
btw, did you ever find a way for me to buy your book?… Can I get it on Amazon yet?…
Ned
I liked this poem. Well done. And I agree with the previous ‘commenter’, the ending is truly brilliant.
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Ever since I’ve started reading your work, I’ve marveled at your ability to find vitality and beauty in the darkness you see around you. Thank you!
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