Hunger drips down her lips
with metallic intent;
the air is busy,
and unfortunate.
I follow her startled shadow
across the sky, where she carves
her birth,
adjusts her lie.
I am an untruth,
a moment of virtue,
a black sheep stretched
over her flowering plateau.
This is no place for love,
or for night,
or for sky.
This is a burial of the
sick compromise
of her and I.
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omfg…the weird lurching perfect symmetry of how this folds back to itself, sort of a poetic moebius strip
thank you for this
I had to go back and read this one. I forget them after they leave me. ❤ Thank you for reminding me!
…and “metallic intent”…BRILLIANT word choice!
🙂 Thanks!
This is absolutely beautiful. That last verse… perfect.
Thank you, pretty!!
wow.
🙂 Thank you friend!