Or calling her ripe name,
begging for skin to be twisted,
inch-by-inch,
I bribe her with my back
to the sun, my skin is enough,
too delicate for these loose brains
and fast nerves,
but trustworthy.
I whistle her black song through my veins.
I burn like tar, like tomorrow
might choke on sensation –
and push!!
She smells like wet dawn,
tastes like molasses. Deep in my throat she turns
over. Heaven is everywhere.
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Maggiemae, my dear…..
After that, heaven damn well BETTER be everywhere!….
gigoid….
Haha. Seriously! Thank you so much for reading. Always love hearing from you!
yes.
Thank you for reading Stacy!!
The last line is perfect!
Oh thank you for your thought. The ending is always a tough one but I liked the way th is one turned out. I appreciate your comment a lot.
Love this! Great write!
Thanks for reading!!
“She smells like wet dawn, tastes like molasses.” – Lushly spoken and perfectly discribed
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“I whistle her black song through my veins”
This is why I read you, Maggie. Brilliant!! 🙂
You are too kind. Thank you Joseph!
You’re very welcome, Maggie! 🙂