A whisper,
sapphire, spiral breath
in the air. We choke
on language. Our silent hands
hold each other
up. The staircase
is a treacherous place,
though.
I at the top.
You at the bottom
of a death match,
strangled by guilt,
waiting for a whisper to
mend your wounds.
You turned me to salt.
I do not breathe.
I cannot whisper.
My eyes have become two
blue deserts.
My voice, a cactus.
I am rolling over barren land,
searching for hard water
and you stand, at the bottom
of the world, in a white ocean begging
me to whisper.
Just wanted to say that I really enjoy your work and when you get that chapbook together, I’d like to figure out a way to get a copy.
Tony B
Thanks Tony! I have a page on FB https://www.facebook.com/pages/MaggieMaeIJustSayThis/205718659522104?fref=ts I will keep updates there and here!! I appreciate the comment!
XOXOXO MM
Already a fan there, Maggie — will keep an eye out! Thanks.
Awesome! I’ll see you around then 🙂
Beautiful poem, I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you! And thank you for reading!!
Yes I like this too…though I do not usually go for such free form verse – to do well with that you really have to be good with words….and you are. Love the sounds here too.
This is amazing! Very thought-provoking…. thanks so much for sharing. 🙂
Oooh that staircase…!
looking forward to today’s National Poetry Month blog tour stop
I’m so excited to be part of it!! Thanks a bunch!
unbelievable!
lovely
Very beautiful, Maggie.
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