Dear Young Man,
I saw your skin smooth like the fountain of youth,
pouring down your river,
your delicate body of water.
Your body is a peach,
ripening,
a firm seed planted in your centre,
ready to harvest in the soil of fertility.
I once took your age and manipulated it.
My skin was an innocent organ,
but my mind played ignorant instruments
and I danced to drums,
too drunk to
notice hands like yours, trembling
down my back side,
searching for my treasure.
I was a golden egg, cracking over a camp fire,
cooking from the inside, out, flirting
with the fruit of the Earth,
and now, Young Man, I feel naivety drip from
your skin, mixing with my worn complexion as
I grind against your skin,
searching for your core,
going back,
back ward in time.
Poignant ~ lovely
You left the word ‘cougar’ out of ypir tags…
LOL…I forgot about that one.
This is awesome. It is a beautiful piece of poetry. It is so strong and moving; yet pensive and contemplative.
Oh to be young again 😉
Indeed! *laughs out loud*
raaawwwrrrr!!!
Mmmm. Yummy!
splendid…may i reblog to the House?
of course!
Reblogged this on House of Heart.
That made me horny.
These lines of yours touched me in every way…
I once took your age and manipulated it.
My skin was an innocent organ,
but my mind played ignorant instruments
and I danced to drums,
Where did you come up with this? Brilliant and such a talented writer you are.
🙂
Tomorrow…yay!!!
I’ve got my open, my friend!! Thanks so much for your words. Very much appreciated.
Surprise! New poem.
http://charliezero1.wordpress.com/2013/01/07/watching-crows-squirt-yellow-mustard-on-those-lollipop-anorexic-holocausts/
Oh My Gosh! I’m so surprised. I must go check it out.
🙂
Beautiful!
🙂 Thank You!!!
I have to follow a writer who can paint a moving picture with words. Very vivid.
Agreed!
This drew me in, wonderfully
Me too!
I loved the pictures this painted for me. Your piece flowed in my mind with such vivid and realistic images and that is what it should do. Good work!
Due to my narcissism and selfishness, I almost never follow other poets. However, I can relate to this, from the opposite perspective. So I read some other things you’ve written.
You are someone I can learn from. I respect that, you, and your work. Fantastic stuff.
I’m thinking “innocence lost” here and the yearning for… I dunno, that youthful joy that we seldom experience while we’re living it, but looks so inviting as we look back….
It looks very inviting sometimes. Other times, I treasure the knowledge I have gained with life experience. 🙂 Thanks Hollyanne!
Reblogged this on Simon Sundaraj-Keun.
Truly enjoyed this sensuous poem – Too just to say thanks for dropping by my block and liking my poem `Blank Page’ – all the best
This so reminds me of Rod Stewart’s song “Maggie Mae.” How poignant and evocative.
I do like the way you write…
Great poem!