Here I am, spitting the fury dragons out
at you.
Here I am, grating your skin
down to truth, scratching away your faux colour.
Revelations!
I lift your sweat stained sheets, rummage beneath and
cut you off at your ankles. Then, I feel for your knees, and
when I find them
I nail them to the perfect imprint beneath your
clammy body. I move upward, farther upward to your
stomach. I wish you had a womb so that you
could understand the
torture of what I am about to do.
Life lurks inside you, thousands at a time,
all patiently waiting in line for just one chance!
I brought a blow torch for this.
I watch your skin bubble and slowly drip out of
character, down your sides and leak into your sheets.
You still sleep.
You barely flinch, snorting oxygen like a pig.
I move up from your melting pot, straight toward
your chest. Your ribs have been a great protector!
I have grown my sharp tongue out, praying that
it would not come to this.
I have no use for your heart.
I only want your eyes to open and see
me sitting here next to your truth.
Love the last part. Gives a beautiful in-depth ending.
nice ending – sitting next to your truth – really liking that
Tough mornings! Lovely turn of words, scary… 🙂
Powerful piece. Nice one.
Whoa!
it just does not do to be too possessive!
Fantastic. The violent, irrepressible urge to inflict a matching pain – that the person who inflicted the hurt, quite thoughtlessly, should be made to feel the pain that we do. Horrible but such an unflinching portrayal of that urge.
that is definitely a power gripper!!
Painfully beautiful.
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