Are you just out of mind? Or have
you lost bed, too?
I’ll lay you down with straw and
help catch your rogue.
The passage to sleep
is in a cottage, as bare
as birthed privates, down a
cottaged street. The seeker has treats
in that darkness! The darkness
where we meet.
You collected loneliness
in places that I jog in. I
watched you paint,
I watched you slice your flesh
with window,
I watched you crawl under his
sheets at night, to
ward off the darkness.
Still it comes, a happy thief,
painted like a victim,
no matter your age, it never will
outgrow you.
Though, your flowers bloom and
your pumpkins grow,
though you scrub light into
your palms,
it never will outgrow you.
I taught you a language, a long time ago, a
protection from the shadows,
before sun marked your
pale skin,
before your lips touched a sugar breast,
you were my garden,
you were my flower;
a light, all of your own, to light your darkness.
Truly wonderful, this.
fantastic 🙂
Wonderful thought process…. :):):):):)
you are such an amazing writer. i am envious and honored to read your work. thank you for sharing it.
‘Tis absolutely beautiful!
🙂 Thanks Astrid!
Just wanted to let you know that I’ve nominated you for the Kreativ Blogger award. 🙂
Sorry – forgot the link!
http://sylverblaque.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/kreativ-blogger-award/
Terrific! Thanks a bunch and congrats to you on the award!
With writing this powerful, you deserve it! 🙂
whoa that one is powerful and sad…really good of course!
Crippling emotion and presciently metaphor ~Deborah
lovely poem…as always 😉
Thanks for reading 🙂
“scrub light inot your palms” WOW.
Thanks David 🙂
vivid imagery and certainly tells a story. i agree with david – i think it’s working on mine thinking about it.
Excellent. Your word choices are unexpected in sequence. That’s originality. Following you.