pink goblets glisten
champagne damp kissing
deep pipes slip in
twisting crimson blushing brides
swollen shifting tides
blue sighs
high rise capstone
twin torrid moans
softens impaling trombone
milk cream weeps
sweet flowers sleep.
maggiemaeijustsaythis
through the darkness there is light
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Nice one, Maggie!
Lovely! Simply lovely!
Short & sweet
I like it
be good to yourself
David
Sweet! Thank you.
Jamie Dedes
I like this – particularly the effect of the half-rhymes.
Good Day ! I have nominated you for the Inspiring Blogger Award 🙂 you can find the details here :
http://aslankanshaw.wordpress.com/2012/03/14/inspiring-blogger-award/
Congratulations ! 😀
Hey my friend!! Thank you so much!! And Congratulations to you on the award.
I toast you with a glass of Champagne. Beautiful.
Roxe Anne! 🙂 Thank you for stopping by and reading. I appreciate that!! I’m diggin your book, by the way! 🙂
Whew…. I’m sweating! Almost painfully evocative, but god, what great images from memory bubbled up!…. welcome back…missed seeing your soulnuggets for a day or two… (yes, I made up the word…. I couldn’t find one in English that gave the right feel to describe what your poetry says, and shows…. your vision gives fresh meaning to the word ‘unique’….) Take care….& Blessed Be….
And never, ever stop writing….. it may not save the world, but it will save a lot of folks’ sanity….
Hey 🙂 Thanks for the welcome!! I love that word. I may have to use that in a piece if you dont mind??
Not at all…. words are for sharing, not keeping… 🙂
Hi, I have nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award as I love your poetry and the range of subjects you deal with.
Check out my post to see the award and read some instructions that go along with it.http://mybeautfulthings.wordpress.com/versatile-blogger-award/
awww. Thank you so much and congratulations to you on the award!!
I tagged you, and hope you’d like to play:-) See my latest blog post.
good to see you back! hope you are doing okay!
Very nice.
Jolly good MM!
Fluid: a sway in the rhythm, tension and return, tension and return.
Very sweet and delightful! Congratulation on your Award!
🙂 Thank you very much! Thanks for coming by!
Beautiful. I love the lyrical quality of this piece.