From the tip-top
of the towering
fortress,
where productions
remain silent but still produce,
where every rehearsed act
plays on, as if
unrehearsed.
Nobody would know the difference unless
they were watching
from the tip-top
of the towering
fortress,
the place that the universe bends for,
dances for,
multiplies for.
Once, a painted woman sat upon
the tower,
supreme and hungry,
watching
different casts perform…
her muse!
She was born with a gift.
An Eye!
A Wandering Eye!
At her command, her left eye would jump
out of its socket
on hunt
as the hungry painted woman
wished.
The Eye knew not the exact
silage, but
there were markings,
specifics, that the Eye knew to watch for.
The painted woman waited,
high in the clouds,
imposing on conversation
between wind
and
weather….
waiting.
Soon, her Wandering Eye would
return
with her meal –
soldiers, fighters,
carpenters,
shaman,
each had a purpose.
The painted woman would accept her
prey, swallowing them completely
in to
herself,
writhing them in and out of consumption,
pulling them deep into
digestion, her stomach
aching for more,
more, more!
She touched
and kissed
and drooled on
each of their gifts
using each
as her very own until
she was
spent.
Then, she would take her lust-probing eye and
retire,
leaving nothing of
her pillage behind!!
A snake,
overflowing
with lasciviousness!
One day, the brushed lady
was brought a tender
slice of
musician, with sad,
blue diamonds sparkling so bright
that when she saw her reflection
in them,
her left gift, was
immediately calcified,
a vegetable!
Useless!
She barely noticed!
They stood together at the tip-top
of the towering fortress,
oblivious to
acts,
actors,
and
actresses.
All the muse she needed stood
beside her, with a box of suffering chocolates
and rust roses,
begging
her
for consumption! On his knees he
pleaded for
use!
Baffled by his strange request, she conformed to
habit.
The painted woman accepted her
prey, swallowing him completely
in,
writhing his body in and out of her consumption,
pulling him deep, deeper into
digestion, her stomach
aching for more,
more, more!
She touched his gifts,
gently kissed his gifts
caressed each gift as if it were her own
until
the bewitching young
musician was spent, sleeping inside her body.
This had never happened before.
She knew “withdraw”
not “succumb”.
How dare he retire without her!
Leaving her here,
alone,
on the tip-top of a towering
fortress without
her only friend,
her tool!
She panicked when the script
started
in the world below. Its silence
sounded different
somehow.
Heartsick.
At that moment, the lady,
standing at the tip-top of the towering fortress
flung herself
from the security of the towers’ height,
diving to join
the world below!
Weird, of course – and excellent!
There is a brand new award in the blogosphere and I have just nominated you to be among the first to receive it! Congratulations on receiving the Creative Chaos Award! Check it out here: http://http://carlarenee45.wordpress.com//2012/03/04/check-this-out-creative-chaos-award/
Enjoy and have fun!
I have no idea what the poem is meant to mean but it is wonderful , it has really taken my attention!
You are so sweet! I love your comments, they make me smile. Even if you don’t understand it, you feel the feeling?! That is how it seems to me anyways. Thanks for your comments sweetness!! XOXO
Yes I love your poems your words not only touch me they grab hold of me and shake me! 😉 XXX
It has a mediaeval tinge. A troubadour’s song.
Yes!! That is what I had in my mind, at the same time, trying to create a modern atmosphere. I’m so glad you noticed that.
We must all re-member ourselves as spiritual beings on a human path. Here to share and grow in our one-ness. This acknowledgment is essential to realizing our greatest potential. Our purposiveness.
jacqui
Wow….what a trip. This one is incredible; most of yours are, but this one is more so. I salute your amazing ability to describe what your inner eye envisions, and can only hope one day to see you turn your eye in a less painful direction. Not all human experience is rooted in pain; pain only tells us how much joy we have yet to come, and I’m sure you will find an entirely new vista to apply your talents to….in the meantime, I’m thankful that I get to witness your growth as a poet…..
“A snake,
overflowing
with lasciviousness!”
what type of a character is she……good lines….
sad
i don’t know if I interpreted the poem correctly but it was sexy… in an odd kind of way.
lol…yeah that’s kind of how I think of myself…sexy…in an odd kind of way. Thanks for the comment XOXOXO
Awesome story telling. Thanks.
Goddamn, I love this. I love a little sexuality in my fantasy because I always love the fantasy in and of sex. This piece has a great sense of flow to it that I can follow and dig. Your style fits this setup well and I’m glad to see it. It’s been awhile since I’ve seen the bardic tradition in the digital era…
I wish there was a “double like” for I would do that here. The way you expand on this story was spectacular.