* This post could be disturbing and difficult or offensive to some readers..it contains adult material and paints a disturbing image, please don’t read if you are sensitive to adult material.
I forked my eyeballs
from their sockets before
the gang
banged
away
at my fourteen aged
bones
for men
bones are not like fine
aged wine
my eyeballs bounced
around with
the pounding
hounding
hard-ons
slippery hours
later
my pig pudding covered
bones
laid to rest
while
my severed eyeballs
suffered alone
with what they had seen.
maggiemaeijustsaythis 
Yikes!
Sounds like something that might have happened to you before, very sad sounding. I hope i am takeing it the right way. If so i am so sorry you had to experience that. 😦
The level of intensity found in your words, your work, never ceases to amaze. Keep it up.
A very intense portrait and scene created here with your words.
I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again. I always appreciate your work so much – it’s so vivid, but stark and extraordinarily powerful. Well done, m’dear. Thanks for sharing your writings with us ^^
Thank you for reading. It is so nice to hear from familiar “voices” in these comments! I appreciate you sticking around!
Really intense..such a clear picture..great writing.
You always know how to express your words, i like it.
powerful image. i got it, though i wanted not to see it at all.
I agree with the others, it is intense, but still very veiled … It smacks of the stories Angelsofsecrets – http://angelsofsecrets.wordpress.com/ – was writing, without being verbose. This is disturbing for sure, even while knowing what does go on in this world. You have my blessings …
this is extra ordinary piece with great flow of words…
Extraordinary, yes. I am rendered speechless
❤ You are wonderful Polly! Thank you!
Can’t pretend I haved a clue about the meaning, but it is thought provoking, powerful and well written.
Nick
…and I appreciate your comment and that you come around the blog! Thanks Nick!!
Interesting point of view… I can’t really tell on what… but it sure is interesting…
Some of your poems, Maggie – they’re like modern-day mythical horrors. Powerful.
Hollyanne…thank you again! ❤ I love hearing from you and look forward to it!
Brutal harsh cruel and oh so sadly true. Brilliantly written
Thank you for your comments ❤ Thank you for READING!!!
Whether from a thought or experience, unfortunately there are too many cases of this happening and it always saddens me. There are always those that will help as they are able to make life a better place, one that should never have to endure such pain. Hugs.
The inner strength you show and the openess with which you share, even that most brutal, and sub-human of experiences, is of itself revealing to the character you have within.
Thank-you.
Very strong/haunting imagery and honest. It really does make you think and feel.
This poem is amazing. So powerful. Wow.
i found thhis poem veary powerful i hope that it was not something u went threw as so meany other people have in there lives. when i read the poem it went threw me to the bottum of my heart when i read it it felt as if i was watching it like a short film.