Raw behind the rib cage
– attack –
to tear flesh
for life to resume
spreads itself across
for a barren
for nothing more
of a Hoarder and
quickest way to your lovers heart is
ripping a hole in the rib cage
Honest to God, it is!
Strong and lonely at the same time. Thanks for sharing.
Thank YOU for the comment. XOXO
Brilliant , raw , mean and true.
a hoarder and an unprotected heart – lovely!
Is that what it’s like sharing a bed with the partner to bring up children with.
Two hearts so entwined even the blankets fuse the bond.
. lovely poem
“A Blanket for A Barren Wasteland” I love this line here, It’s literal, strong, and beautiful, you don’t really have ones heart until you have it. Only then can you feel the thick red life in your grasp. Hoarder and unprotected! Brilliant
Maggie Mae’s heart is never unprotected!
Stunning – your words rip the off the page like arrows.
Wow! In one word…amazing! Thanks for dropping at my site 😉