The eggs are dead in the kitchen;
an ex-lover is dead in
the bedroom,
under the sheets –
fiberglass
posing as silk.
I try to convince the ceiling
of my intelligence.
Laying on my back for three minutes;
faking fever.
The eggs are dead in the kitchen;
the coffee is growing mold – I am
polluted like the grout in
the shower where he
pulls and pulls
until
satisfaction debilitates his words.
Till he cannot
tell me that the eggs are dead
in the kitchen.
I like this one.
Beautiful use of repetition for a macabre topic!
intense! your unique way of putting things !
So much conveyed within these lines..quite fine IMHO.
*~ Deep ~* ~ Dark ~ * Magnificent portrayal of a very specific and difficult emotion. ~ : )
The repetition creates a dark rhythm that drives the poem home.